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Linggo, Hulyo 8, 2012

The End for a Wonderful yet Heart-breaking Story.

            The story I was telling is 'Romeo and Juliet'. It's a popular story known by all of us. Even though I know what the story is, I really haven't read any of those books or materials that tell the whole story. I just know this story because it is a quest in a game called 'RuneScape'. But the quest is quite different from the real story itself.

             Anyways, let's get back to the reals story itself. The story is quite sad for romance, making every reader feel sad. The parts that I liked to most is when Romeo or Juliet thinks about a way to get out of the obstacles made by their families rivalry. Their rivalry is so bad, so bad it led them to death.

            The ending is so sad. Killing is the only way to them. However, the two families started to be kind to each other when they knew the situation. If I were the author (imagine), I would have their parents have a nightmare about Romeo and Juliet if they didn't let them have their marriage. The families then fix up then let Romeo and Juliet have their own marriage then both families will live happily ever after.

            Oh how sweet ending it is. But I want to add a twist to the story. After the planning of the marriage, Paris will then have his revenge to Romeo. He plotted a plan to kill Romeo. The plan is to kill Romeo using his assassins (including Paris himself) but Juliet knew this situation. She told Romeo to counter back by having the Old Police Force (or the police back time) with a secret detective.The detective is collecting pieces of evidence to show Paris the sense of justice.  The plot is being engaged and then the Old Police Force will stop his assassins (except Paris) and then the detective finds and stops Paris from killing Romeo. The detective shows evidences that will really make Paris as the mastermind. Paris gets jailed with a life sentence and the couple will marry with their parents happily ever after.

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